English Composition Class @ LVS Online

April 19, 2010

Fixing Fragments

A fragment is part of a sentence that is missing a subject or verb, and it does not express a complete thought. While it is punctuated to look like a complete sentence, a fragment cannot stand on its own.

Here are the distinguishing features of a sentence fragment:
It is missing a subject

It is missing a verb or has the wrong verb form

It is a leftover phrase

It is an abandoned clause

It is a misuse of “such as, for example, especially,” etc.

Once you’ve identified what your sentence fragment is missing, fix it using one of these strategies:

Three Ways to Fix a Fragment

1. Attach the fragment to a nearby complete sentence.

Sometimes a fragment occurs because it’s a leftover of from a previous sentence or it’s an abandoned clause meant to introduce the following sentence.

Incorrect: I forgot to eat breakfast. On the morning of my driver’s test.

Correct: I forgot to eat breakfast on the morning of my driver’s test.

Incorrect: If the front door is locked. Use the back entrance.

Correct: If the front door is locked, use the back entrance.

2. Revise the fragment by adding whatever is missing – subject, verb, complete thought.

Incorrect: Loves to lie around in the sun all day. (Subject is missing. Who loves to lie around?)

Correct: My roommate’s pug loves to lie around in the sun all day.

Incorrect: Joe to train everyday. (Verb is missing. Also, “to train” is the wrong verb form.)

Correct: Joe trains everyday for the marathon next month.

Correct: Joe is training everyday for the marathon next month.

3. Rewrite the fragment or the entire passage that contains the fragment.

Incorrect: Our new landlord was expected to make changes. Such as fixing the plumbing, installing a new washer, and replacing the security gate. Has not done any of it yet and weeks have passed.

Correct: Our new landlord was expected to make changes, such as fixing the plumbing, installing a new washer, and replacing the security gate lock. Weeks have passed, and he still has not done any of it yet.

1 Comment »

  1. i used to do DIY plumbing at home at my work seems to be on par with regular plumbers.,::

    Comment by Alisha Cox — May 25, 2010 @ 8:55 pm

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